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Many of these have been circulated before to friends, in different forms. Danny once made me a group of hand-thrown prayer jars, and one Christmas I sent them out with copies of the prayer in the last section. Some have been in letters, some on things I built, some in shorter hand-made copies of this book.
Originally I wrote (because I didn't have a typewriter) on punched cards, and used an old unit record machine (IBM 407) to list out what I was working on. Since then, I have used many different computers, and a pile of handwritten notes and margin notations. The final draft for this was made on a computer because I am still in contention for the title of world's worst typist. Besides, why deceive you ? I really like them, I have a machine-friendly heart. These have all been written over the last thirty-eight years, the first ones between 1967 and 1973. The ones I like the best came later, around 1980 to 1988, and then again in 2005. Some of the oldest ones I have rewritten to make them cleaner and less clumsy, but I feel the ideas have remained the same. Many I got rid of altogether because they were too personal, silly, self-indulgent, ghastly, too obvious, badly written, irrelevant, or some ugly combination of the above. You may feel that I did not edit out nearly enough material. Everyone's a critic at heart. I've had a few comments over the years about the mechanics of my writing style. Not everyone seems to appreciate my punctuation or format. I can only provide a peripheral explanation, since I am too used to it now to explain it any better. The idea of capitalizing "I" everywhere it appears on a page seems to place too much undue emphasis on me; after all, why not capitalize "You" (common in many European languages, but not English). Likewise, capitals to mark the beginning of a sentence seem equally peculiar if you know where it starts anyway, and don't exist in oriental languages. Form is not a good substitute for content. The spacing lets me put emphasis or a pause where it seems most appropriate, and to make the reading smoother. Often the shape of words seems to have its own meaning. I don't think that a forest of brackets, semicolons and commas would be much of an improvement, coupled with dense-packed text. |
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Anyway, style is personal, and this is mine; so don't fret over it. I'm not likely to change to make you happy (if you are grammar crazed), but I'll certainly let you write any way you want, which is quite a gift these days.
Bart Braverman was kind enough to share something with me years ago that I thought was humorous originally, but have since found to be surprisingly accurate: ----You can tell whether someone really loves you by whether or not they lean over to unlock the car door for you.--- Because I have found it to be so useful, along with it's logical derivatives, I feel compelled to pass it along. Every so often, I come across something great, a story or song, and wish I had a way to put a footnote in your life so you would see it too. This is my best chance to have my way on this issue, and I hope something here will be new to you, and a welcome and pleasant surprise. This is a pretty eclectic mixture, so something here may interest you, no matter what your taste may be. Books and stories:
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Songs and records:
If you are a drinker, let me pass along my favorite drink; CC, grapefruit juice and ice. Another one, called a "Captain's Enigma" from The Cannery in Vancouver, is also not bad; light and dark rum, apricot brandy, orange juice and crushed ice. |
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On a closing note, I have lost track of quite a few friends over the years, since we have all traveled so much. This is my attempt to make amends. If you want to get a note off to me, even if it is just to berate me for my bad writing, you can send it to me by Email at: walter2@sphere.bc.ca I also collect blue things, you're always welcome to send me one. All for now.
Every heart is a lock
every word is a key this book is for you a small gift from me. If you liked this book, please donate $10 to your local food bank, or do something nice for somebody you don't know, and we are even. |
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